55-Fiction  
The Final Solution

The Final Solution

Capture Date : 00:06, Oct 12, 2003
Notes : I will probably be accused of all sorts for writing this one but I find it rather chilling a concept myself. Oddly, 55's seem unusually well suited for alternative history stories.
(C) : Copyright Michael Lawrie, 2003. All Rights Reserved.
From: helyolight@hotmail.com (13:27, Jan 31, 2004)
First of all, you made a mistake.
the nation of Israel was only formed after the Great War, that is WWI.

Secondly, though the idea is quite creative, and is rich in irony, the story is quite bland. 'they use the total electric output of germany.'

I think you should try some more challenging writings in the future, and not just put on paper one idea.
Branch out.
From: Yulanda (06:15, Feb 08, 2004)
i get the idea that last commenter was probably jewish and just looking for something to complain about. there is no mistake historically since by 1996 there was a nation called israel. its a good story michael please don't branch out i like the 55 word stories !
From: Michael (michael) (09:55, Dec 23, 2004)
Branch out? It's not like all my 55's are single themed... This is one story, with a single plot.

It's also fiction - The Jews claim Israel as their destiny and they are a warmongering lot, so who knows what would have happened...

I agree about the "electricity" phrase though, it is messy.
From: GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!! (22:37, Dec 30, 2004)
i luv the LOTR 1!!!!
From: Asdfjkl (16:06, Jun 15, 2005)
I'm Jewish and this is excellent...
From: spacecowboy66 (07:10, Jun 01, 2006)
Isn't this just a re-write of some script from Terminator 2?
From: Tank (12:11, Nov 01, 2006)
Ah ha!
This is great!
From: JML (18:53, Mar 22, 2007)
There are several things wrong with the logic of this story, but I'll just point out the most obvious. If the world had to pick one person to send back to save it, do you really think they would have picked Hitler?
From: Peter (09:35, Apr 03, 2007)
Here's a squidoo lens on people writing nanofics...

http://www.squidoo.com/nanofiction/
From: Peter (09:39, Apr 03, 2007)
Oh! Cmon smartaleks it's 1986. Its not Hitler they sent...Adolf is someone else who is sent to change the history of the world...and this nanofic suggests he succeeded.

Just not sure if it was that same old goat humper.
From: Aurora (18:41, May 08, 2007)
hmm...you can't be wring in a fictional short story, you don't know what he's referencing, and you really can't say that he was faulted and here's the facts, it's just not right.

I like it, it's simple.
From: Anonymous Frenchman (18:54, Oct 17, 2008)
hehe, nice one. I thought this was retarded until I read the last sentence, then I thought "awesome dude". lol :)

And chill people, who cares whether or not Israel would have existed without Nazi Germany, it's a clever take on things!


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